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You went to the guest bedroom (after grabbing your bags) but changed into your usual clothes instead of your PJ's. You were expecting something, or someone...

You were half awake the entire night, waiting for J.A.R.V.I.S to sound the alarm that an intruder had entered. But no such alarm came and you started to feel anxious. You heard a small creak and your eyes shot open in response to the sound.

You grabbed a sphere from your bag and walked out of the room, hearing Tony snoring softly from down the hall.

A tall, dark shadow swiftly moved down the halls to where the suits were being kept. With light feet, you followed the figure as silently as possible.

*beep, bleep, beep*

The intruder was trying to punch in the right code to access the previous tech. As you snuck up behind him.

*Beep, beep, beep*

When you got close enough, you slowly pressed your black pistol to his head. "Move away Zexel." You said sternly and the man slowly raised his hands above his head.

"Nice disguise." You stated.

"I'm surprised you recognized me." Came his rather calm reply.

"Call it a hunch." You said with slight playfulness. "Now, you're coming with me."

"Is that right..." He said in that snake like voice of his.

Suddenly his human disguise vanished and he knocked the gun out of your hand with his skeleton-like alien tail.

You dropped the sphere and pushed a button with your foot to make your suit come to life and guard your frame.

The grey-black colored alien with large black eyes and scaly skin had a silver colored armor on, but it was not nearly as strong as yours.

In the short time it took for your suit to attach itself, he had finished putting in the code and sprinted over to the large array of suits.

"J.A.R.V.I.S, wake Tony up, there's an intruder." You said, wondering why you hadn't thought of this earlier.

Zexel laughed. "J.A.R.V.I.S is... sick right now."

"Daisy... Daisy... Give me your answer do..."

You cringed. "Virus."

You shot at the beast several times, but Zexel was nimble and avoided each blast, trying to get into the suit each time. You both knew that if he succeeded, it would be a lot harder to defeat him.

His web like hands were all over the red and gold suit as he scrambled to get inside when suddenly the silver suit activated.

The former image of himself faded and you prepared for the worst. Apparently their technology had greatly increased since your last briefing...

You charged up your blaster and just as you shot at him, he avoided the hit and flew towards you, tackling you mid flight.

He flew you through the main room  and you two crashed out of the window.

. . .

Meanwhile, J.A.R.V.I.S was in his own little world.

"I... am... Iron Bot, dun na dun na dun na na Iron Bot."
Surprise! And if you don't know what I'm alluding to here, you will know in the next chapter. :D And if you do know, Note Me, don't spoil it please. :3 Hehehe I'm so excited. (I was feeling super depressed earlier just crying and crying but posting this chapter is perking me right up.) You guys are the best! 

I hope you all like it. :3

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Rainpelt500 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD I love what you did to the Iron Man song at the end~ just fabulous!
SnowyEvening Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe. Thank you! :)
Rainpelt500 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem~
halomindy Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
IRON BOT!!!!! XD that an alien!? ...plz tell me im not predator T.T
SnowyEvening Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe. XD

Yes that is an alien, and no I don't think so, I never saw the movie. Thanks for reading!  :D
StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no! Poor Jarvis! XD
FlyingTigerr Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I am so sorry but that part with JARVIS and him saying "Daisy... Daisy...give me your answer do..." wasn't that from the movie Robots and that fat robot (xD) was saying it or something?

Oh well. Amazing chapter as always :)
SnowyEvening Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Originally I was referring to this toy flower pot I had as a kid. ;P But now that you mention it, yes that was in Robots too. :)

Thank you! 
FlyingTigerr Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Oh haha and your welcome~!
Luigidoesminecraft Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Professional Writer
Dun, dun, dun... AWESOME!
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